Comments on: Writing Sample #1 http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/ Guess what I'm reading? Wed, 16 May 2012 07:49:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Samantha http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9759 Samantha Tue, 01 May 2007 23:13:06 +0000 http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9759 Awww, he touched boobs, she was proud, he lied. That was cute. Awww, he touched boobs, she was proud, he lied. That was cute.

]]> By: Rosie http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9756 Rosie Tue, 01 May 2007 21:48:43 +0000 http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9756 Precocious these two but I liked it as well. Know why? I know kids like this. I don't think June is pushy Shuz, she <i> thinks </i> she knows she's ready. Have a sister like that, who btw, did lose her virginity at 14. She didn't regret it until she was like 25. Weird, huh?! Precocious these two but I liked it as well. Know why? I know kids like this. I don’t think June is pushy Shuz, she thinks she knows she’s ready. Have a sister like that, who btw, did lose her virginity at 14. She didn’t regret it until she was like 25. Weird, huh?!

]]> By: shuzluva http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9755 shuzluva Tue, 01 May 2007 20:42:02 +0000 http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9755 Hmm. I like Hank's honest awkwardness. June seems...advanced and pushy. But her nervousness shows with the crossed arms. I like it! I'm dreading the day the girls become teenagers. DREADING IT!!! Hmm. I like Hank’s honest awkwardness. June seems…advanced and pushy. But her nervousness shows with the crossed arms. I like it!

I’m dreading the day the girls become teenagers. DREADING IT!!!

]]> By: L.E. Bryce http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9753 L.E. Bryce Tue, 01 May 2007 19:20:03 +0000 http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9753 Wow, that's really good! Wow, that’s really good!

]]> By: Sherry Thomas http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9751 Sherry Thomas Tue, 01 May 2007 17:22:54 +0000 http://dionnegalace.com/wordpress/2007/05/01/writing-sample-1/#comment-9751 I like it. Never had a fourteen-year-old myself. And now it's too late to start. :-) I like it.

Never had a fourteen-year-old myself. And now it’s too late to start. :-)

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