Comments on: Bettie Sharpe Presents Ember, Pt II

By: CJ

CJ — Thu, 15 Nov 2007 23:43:58 +0000

Yikes! Great work. I’m so glad you did something truly interesting with this tale and had the four of them enjoy themselves together. Onto the next exciting installment.

By: Ann Bruce

Ann Bruce — Wed, 14 Nov 2007 03:08:33 +0000

I’m not reading a word until the entire serial is posted because I detest cliffhangers…but everyone here is tempting me to break my self-imposed rule. Dang.

By: catie

catie — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 21:55:34 +0000

Ah Bettie, how I adore your take on “Cinderella’s” tale!

By: Ember « moonlit garden

Ember « moonlit garden — Fri, 09 Nov 2007 14:01:18 +0000

[...] Part II [...]

By: Sherry Thomas

Sherry Thomas — Fri, 09 Nov 2007 00:02:12 +0000

This is just cruel and unusual punishment.

This is like Tanith Lee on acid. It’s orgasmic. Fuck me again, Bettie.

By: Meredith McGuire

Meredith McGuire — Thu, 08 Nov 2007 23:56:23 +0000

I have just realized that I have absolutely *no* discipline when it comes to parceling out my reading. Can’t — wait — for next — installment!

Seriously, this is really gripping stuff. And how amped am I that the wicked stepmother and stepsisters aren’t wicked after all? There’s a pleasingly feminist slant to this story so far… I love it!

By: Isabelle Santiago

Isabelle Santiago — Thu, 08 Nov 2007 22:19:24 +0000

Oh and let us know when itll be available as a PDF/HTML file! Please?

By: Bettie

Bettie — Thu, 08 Nov 2007 22:14:04 +0000

So, it’s time for part 3, right? Like now? No, really… I mean RIGHT NOW! *stomps foot*

I just realized something: I am evil. I hate cliffhangers. I have the patience of a two-year-old. I like my gratification instant. But I wrote a serial. And when Bam runs other stories in “The Serial” I am going to have to wait, just like everyone else.

As you reap, so shall you sew, karma, irony, and all that other cosmic justice stuff…I am so screwed.

By: Isabelle Santiago

Isabelle Santiago — Thu, 08 Nov 2007 22:13:39 +0000

This gets more and more amazing with each word. I love Ember’s snarky intelligence and the spin you put on her stepmother and sisters. That was priceless. This Prince sounds like a dangerous fellow. With his power to lure anything he wants from anyone he wants. No wonder he wants what he can’t have! Wonderful!

By: Jane

Jane — Thu, 08 Nov 2007 20:28:41 +0000

Can we have part 3 yet?