Comments on: Lorelie Brown’s Tarnished Angel, pt. 8

by: bettie

Fri, 09 May 2008 16:30:16 +0000

I’m a little late catching up on my reading…

Great ending, Lorelie, and a great story. Good job. When will we be seeing more?

by: MaryKate

Tue, 06 May 2008 20:02:46 +0000

Thanks for the wonderful ride, Lorelie. I’ve enjoyed every second of it. You’re a true talent.

by: Freebird

Sat, 03 May 2008 18:42:03 +0000

Whew…Lorelie, THIS was good (meaning all 8 chapters), I loved the story, and the language.. boy. When reading romance books so many of them “circle around the porridge” using words to conceal, then just as things start to get fun, they cut and move to the next scene. I absolutely love the fact that you don’t do that.

You are very good, I sure hope you are making more money at this than your government job

by: Lorelie

Fri, 02 May 2008 16:46:09 +0000

Thanks everyone who read it! It’s meant a lot to me, I don’t think you could know.

Come swing by my blog, I’m running a little contest this month!

by: Jill Sorenson

Fri, 02 May 2008 16:02:20 +0000

What a satisfying conclusion! It was a nice touch that Corinne didn’t need to be rescued by Adam (again). And I loved the friendship between her and Lissa.

by: Kelly McCrady

Thu, 01 May 2008 22:57:24 +0000

Bravo, buddy! I’m so happy Corinne’s story was well-received. I had fun reading it all over again.

More! More!

by: katiebabs

Thu, 01 May 2008 15:37:48 +0000

Excellent ending Lorelie, diapers and all

by: Brighthorse

Thu, 01 May 2008 14:57:00 +0000

Just when I was beginning to think Corrine a little too self-pitying, she finally snapped out of it … I loved the way the women were the ones who rescued the damsel in distress. All in all, a fabulous conclusion to an exciting tale!

by: Jambrea

Thu, 01 May 2008 14:51:47 +0000

Wonderful and it was worth the wait.