Comments on: Jamie Craig’s Forsaken, Part 1

By: Freebird

Freebird — Sat, 10 May 2008 18:17:11 +0000

Oooooh… I am a sucker for a mystery, and for men in uniform, gay or not… this is such a great story, You paint a vivid color of Jeff and now I wonder what Xavier is like..and who would have killed poor sweet Robin? I hereby proclaim myself an addict!

By: Katie Ann

Katie Ann — Sat, 10 May 2008 05:26:50 +0000

Ooooh I’m so excited to read more of this!!

By: Vivien Dean

Vivien Dean — Fri, 09 May 2008 20:05:03 +0000

Thanks, everyone! We’ve been chomping at the bit to share this with everybody.

By: Tumperkin

Tumperkin — Fri, 09 May 2008 19:52:31 +0000

Me likey.

By: Ciara

Ciara — Fri, 09 May 2008 05:35:58 +0000

That was fabulous! I’m completely hooked. Crime stories give me nightmares, but after that beginning I HAVE TO KNOW WHATS NEXT!!!

By: sula

sula — Fri, 09 May 2008 03:13:06 +0000

ok, coming back to say hi after reading this quickly before work in the AM and adding linkage to my blog. I’m hooked. More, more! Xavier is a great name, btw. When’s part 2?

By: Helen M

Helen M — Thu, 08 May 2008 23:18:21 +0000

Ooh, colour me intrigued. Def coming back next week for more.

By: Mary M

Mary M — Thu, 08 May 2008 22:58:53 +0000

Great beginning !! I like Jeff a lot – and I expect to like Xavier too when we know it better. Please tell me you’re going to post at least a chapter a day! Shit I should know better than to get hooked on something like that. Soaps always drove me crazy with their cutting just when things were reaching a peak then announcing cheerfully “To be continued”… Made me want to smash something. Effective, though.

By: JaimeK

JaimeK — Thu, 08 May 2008 17:44:17 +0000

fab-uuuu-lous!!!!

By: shuzluva

shuzluva — Thu, 08 May 2008 17:16:17 +0000

It’s Starbucks in a bottle and a word count requirement that’s keeping me up.

I’m counting. You better type faster, babes!

Vivien & Piper, I will now commence complaining about the term serial and my total lack of patience:

I’m hooked; I loved the interplay between Jeff and Andrea in the beginning and could feel the tension between Jeff and Xavier at the end of the chapter. Nicely done! And for the record, your teaser last week was enought to have me excited about it ahead of publication. However, I am now completely committed.

Damn serials.