Comments on: Jamie Craig’s Forsaken, Part Two

by: Helen M

Sun, 11 May 2008 23:34:54 +0000

Hee, this chapter almost needs a ‘dun dun DUUNN!’ sound effect at the end, there - I LOVE it! Good work, ladies.

And thank you for sharing the 2nd chapter before Thursday, Bam!

by: sula

Sun, 11 May 2008 18:41:18 +0000

omg, omg! that cliffhanger is just cru-EL! gah. Can’t wait for the next installment. I’m such a glutton for punishment. lol.

by: Sue

Sun, 11 May 2008 17:42:00 +0000

Oh, my God. How hot! Please, can we have more? Like, now?!

by: Freebird

Sat, 10 May 2008 18:34:57 +0000

I’m at the edge of my seat, nails digging into the desk, this is great writing and having to wait for more is pure torture!

by: Katie Ann

Sat, 10 May 2008 05:54:05 +0000

Ooh thankyee for the quick fix, I’ll try not to throw rotten vegetables while waiting impatiently for the next installment now. This story is so intriguing…

by: JaimeK

Fri, 09 May 2008 22:49:57 +0000

This is killing meeeeeeee!!!

by: Vivien Dean

Fri, 09 May 2008 20:10:57 +0000

Whoa, second chapter up already! Though Bam broke sooner than I expected, lol.

So should I not mention how many cliffhangers are still to come?

by: Tumperkin

Fri, 09 May 2008 19:59:31 +0000

Woo hoo!

by: Karen B

Fri, 09 May 2008 18:32:43 +0000

This is awesome and I can’t wait til next week.

by: shuzluva

Fri, 09 May 2008 16:56:53 +0000

From one cliffhanger to another. I’m dyin’ here! This is fantastic. Thanks ladies…FOR DRIVING ME CRAZY!