Comments on: Dionne Galace’s Chasing Daisy, Pt. 2

by: Zoe Winters

Fri, 11 Jul 2008 05:25:23 +0000

Meow. Nice.

I also love the description about Alfred.

And that she’s a vegetarian. Didn’t see that coming. And the line about “the whole fallen-angel thing”

You’ve got really great characterization going.

by: Samantha

Mon, 07 Jul 2008 15:52:48 +0000

Squeeeee! Is that acceptably coherent? Wait, I don’t care…and eeeee! HOT!

by: Mona

Sat, 05 Jul 2008 01:30:54 +0000

Great job…can’t wait for chapter 3.

by: LeaF

Thu, 03 Jul 2008 23:29:02 +0000

Wonderful prose and plot. Agree with Tumperkin, the chemistry at the end sizzles. Waited all week for Chapter 2, now, sigh, have to wish away another week until you post Chapter 3.

Just loving it, great writing!!!

by: Tumperkin

Thu, 03 Jul 2008 20:03:42 +0000

Oh very nice! 10 points for using ‘factotum’ and that chemistry at the end is just superb!

by: Christine

Thu, 03 Jul 2008 15:42:45 +0000

I love it! Daisy is so sassy… I love the way she delayed the inevitable by not getting out of the car.

I can’t wait for next week!

by: shuzluva

Thu, 03 Jul 2008 14:22:29 +0000

My tongue has just fallen out of my mouth. I can’t believe I have to wait for next week! That was…awesome.